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In Hell Part 1

Title: A Well Deserved Torment Part 2
Victim: Teen Girl Sania (16yo)

When the devil returned, 10 years after he started Sania's tickle torment, he found her broken and still laughing very loud from the tickling that was forced upon her.
As he approached Sania, he told his demons to stop the tickling and also made the hands stop, that tickled her additionally.
"Well Sania, if you think these 10 years, which surely felt like at least 100 years to you, were bad, then all I can tell you is that it will get much worse than that."
After saying that he used a binding spell on Sania, making her immobile.
He put her over his shoulders and brought her to a cell somewhere in the deep depths of hell.
The devil then tied her spread eagle to a table, to make all of her sweetspots available for tickling.
"I think all I can do now is to wish you lots of fun and laughter. My 2 friends will take care of you."
2 human men about 30 years old entered the cell. On earth they were murderers with a deep tickling fetish. They used to rob single women and tickled them to death after they told them where the money, jewelry and everything else of higher value was. They killed 10 women, but died in a plane crash while being on their way to China.
The men tickled Sania in the most torturous ways imaginable and as they always did on earth, merciless too.
She laughed very loud and couldn't stand the tickling for one single second but she had to and there was no chance of escaping her 2 torturers.
This continued for many many years and Sania got her whole body tickled by the 2 men extremely hard.

And now that 100.000 years have passed, Sania is still tortured. Currently she gets the soles of her feet tickled with highpower brushes and her sides, ribs and belly by a 20 armed tickle robot.
100.000 years may be much for humans but when you are doomed to be tickled forever this is nearly nothing, just like a drop of water in the ocean.

The End
Finally I have finished the first part of my In Hell series.
I'm already thinking about ideas for part 2 but until I start with it I have to work on the next story.
Feel free to comment.
If you would like to draw a picture about on of my stories or request a story please pm me.
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Krystalmyth Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Merciless, short and sweet. My favorite kind of concept, when I'm in~ certain moods. ♥
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot^^ Glad to hear that :)
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MtChelsing Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012
GREAT. I hope the devil never lets her out. I also wish I was there, licking and sucking on her toes. Naughty girls always taste good on their trembling feet.
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The devil never did so. Once he gets you, he won't let you go ever :evillaugh:
I couldn't agree more. Also, punishing naughty girls also has something awesome about it.
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MtChelsing Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
I know. Pretty girls that stand around bitching should all have feathers under their feet. Of course, after someone is brave enough to take their shoes off.
Lol. Every second Sania spent giggling with all her boyfriends was another step closer to eternal torment in hell. I wonder if her boyfriends ever knew what was gonna happen to her pretty little body, or if they'd approve of it...
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed. They should be feathered mercilessly. Yeah if they are brave enough to do that lol.
That's how i see it aswell. They most likely didn't know but definately would approve of it xD
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MtChelsing Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
lol. You mean not one of her boyfriends would want to save her from the devil?
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No they wouldn't as they knew in the end she's been playing with them
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MtChelsing Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
Yeah, but I bet they wouldn't mind licking her feet while she's in hell. Even if she's gone a whole school day in sneakers and socks. Naughty girls always taste the sweetest. It would be fun to taste her fear.
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It would be great fun indeed. Sneakers and socks on a hot day. Best taste imaginable.
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