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In Hell Part 1

Title: A Well Deserved Torment Part 1
Victim: Teen Girl Sania (16yo)

Sania has always been a naughty girl.
She lied, cheated, picked on the weaker ones and many things more.
With her great beauty and nice body, she always managed to get all the boys she wanted and played with them no matter if they were single or not. This caused her to be hated by many girl. Sania really was a beautiful girl, from head to toe.
She didn't give a damn about other girls hating her and also she thought that what she was doing was right.
But one fateful day when she crossed the street in the evening, a drunken man ran her over with his car.
Sania was dead immediately.

She awoke and felt an overwhelming heat and smelled sulphur.
"Where am I?", she asked herself.
"You are in hell Sania and I am your new master. I am the devil."
"But... how...??" "Well, you had an accident on earth, in which you got killed and because you have always been a bitch to everyone, you came here instead of heaven. I like naughty girls like you, because they always get a special torture from me. You will never ever feel pain, even though you will stay in hell for all of eternity. I have a better plan for you. You will be tickled by me, my machines, demons and so on for all of eternity.", the devil said.

"T-t-tickled... You can't do that to me.... I'm..", Sania was speechless.
"I know that you are extremely ticklish all over your body but I don't care for that. You have never cared for others and so the same fate will be forced upon you."
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!", Sania screamed before being teleported to another place of hell.

There she was stripped to her bra and panties, put on a rack and stretched out.
Next, the devil called 2 four-armed demons with long and extremely sharp nails.
One started to tickle her armpits and ribs and the other one tickled her sides and inner thighs.
NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOPLEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASESTAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!!!!
I'M TOO TICKLISH!!!!!!!!! STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!!!! I CAN'T TAKE IT!!!!!

The devil watched Sania suffer with delight and called for a third demon which should tickle Sania's knees and soles.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! THAT'S TOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
After 1 week of non stop tickling the devil waved his left hand and from everywhere from out of the rack, hands with sharp claws appeared also tickling her.
"Keep tickling her like that until I return here", the devil ordered.
And so the demons with help from the demonic hands ticklied the hell out of Sania until the devil returned, which was 10 years later.

to be continued...
May I introduce to you, my new series of stories which is called "In Hell". For the first story, I chose a random girl but there will be anime/video game or maybe also celebrity girls which will be sent to hell by me.
Same procedure as every story:
Feel free to comment.
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:iconmtchelsing:
MtChelsing Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012
lol. I know this is kinda old, but this is certainly my kind of story. Punished for eternity! Now that's extreme! COOL. I wish I was there so I could tickle her myself...
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad to hear that. It's mine aswell. I like any kinds of tickling, but the extreme and merciless tickling is my favorite aswell :)
I wish so aswell. Would be awesome to be a torturer in Tickle Hell :)

Hmm I just got an idea... do you rp by any chance? Would be cool to maybe rp about girls in such extremely ticklish situations
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:iconmtchelsing:
MtChelsing Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
Yeah. Back when I use to go to school there were plenty of girls there that I'd have liked to send to hell. Especially one girl called Clarissa. She was around the same age as Sania in this story. And she also fits the description pretty good as well.
She was gorgeous but also a bitch to all her friends and the loner girls. She even got into a fight once and kicked a poor emo chick right in the face. Broke several teeth too.
lol, I would happily rp about her being in hell.
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow she really was a bitch then!!
I'd love to do that rp with you and play her so you can unleash your most sadistic tickle ideas on her.
How would you like to rp? Here on dA or do you have like msn or skype?
Send me a note please and let me know how you wanna do it :)
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:iconmtchelsing:
MtChelsing Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
We can just do it here.
First, I'd take off her pretty little pink shoes real slowly to increase her fear. Then I'd place my mouth over her toes and pull her socks off with my teeth...
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sania: "H-hey, w-what are you doing?!? Leave me alone you creep!!", Clarissa shouts at you.
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:iconmtchelsing:
MtChelsing Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
"Calm down honey," I'd say to Sania and kiss her feet gently. "You're gonna be here for a while. So get comfortable."
Then I'd take off Clarissa's shoes in the same fashion, using my mouth on her feet.
Then I'd say to them both. "I will randomly pick one of you and bury my face in your feet and tickle you ten years non-stop while the other waits for her turn. Whichever one of you I choose will depend on how well you beg and struggle now..."
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
With both girls struggling none was willing to beg you until suddenly...
"NO DON'T PLEASE SON'T TICKLE MY FEET!!", Sania begged, while Clarissa kept silent.
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Jetzt hab ichs mir überlegt.
Ich dachte immer der Himmel würde langweilig werden, doch wenn ich das jetzt so lese, werde ich nicht mehr so frech zu den Lehrern sein! ^^;
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm ja könnte schlimm für dich werden dann^^; Wobei ich glaube dass es nicht ganz so schlimm bestraft wird. Aber weniger frech wäre vielleicht trotzdem nicht ganz so verkehrt^^
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:XD: hoffen wirs
Ja da hast du recht.... muss mal meine wortwahl zügeln...
bin ja im lehrerzimmer schon bekannt als "Diejenige, die kein Blatt vorm Mund nimmt"
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Torri-chan Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
10 years? Damn! Oh well, she deserved it.
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah she really did deserve it
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Torri-chan Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe oh if only I could see people I know having to deal with that, the ones that are jerks anyway.
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yes I would love to see certain people there. i hate this type of persons and i know many who would fit into her position
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Torri-chan Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Same here. Of course none of my friends, but I'm skilled at helping all my friends and people around me stay in a good mood unless I'm depressed myself.
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
OK cool. I'm like that too. I help everyone and mostly my friends. there is rarely a day where i'm having a bad mood though
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Torri-chan Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, my friends Seth and Layla (They're both younger than me but only by a year or two) are a lot of fun to have around. Sometimes I'll just sit there and poke them in the sides or something like that. I usually have to be careful with Layla, though.
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Awww i see. That's nice. I ususally walk up to female friends and tickle them playfully. Oh why do you have t be carefull with her? Too ticklish?
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the-tickling-master Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2009
Mwahaha, she got what she deserved >=)

Now, I won't like to be an devil, but I will just LOVE to have a slave to tickle for eternity :D
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featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
It's girls like her I can't stand so it was well deserved I think^^

Yes, me too xD
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babyshadow101 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008
whens the next par con you do it today please.
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:iconfeatherblade2008:
featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
i'm already working on it and i try to finish it today.
if i find the time (i'm very busy at the moment) i post it in the next 2 or 3 days at latest.
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babyshadow101 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2008
take you time its that i whanted to know ARE you doing a next part?
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badass000000 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2008
wow.. 10 years :jawdrop: ,.. thats gotta suck. Glad its not me! :XD:
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:iconfeatherblade2008:
featherblade2008 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, sucks to be her, but she deserves it, don't you think? :clap:
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badass000000 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2008
Yeah I geuss so :)
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