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The Bet

The Middle Ages:
Johanna and her three guy friends Abrax, Brabax and Califax called "Abrafaxe" went to Halberstadt, a small town near the convent St. Marien where Johanna lived, to get some things for the strict nun Sister Adelheid.
They needed to hurry cause Sister Adelheid hated to have to wait. Though.. she hated Johanna in general.
"Let's hurry guys, or the dumb Adelheid will yell at me again!", Johanna, a young tomboyish girl with red, nearly shoulder long hair, shouted as she ran along the way in a few metres in front of the others.
Wearing her usual white bandana with a blue patch and blue rags with a white apron.
Also she wasn't wearing any shoes.
Running to a shop to pick up ingredients for cooking, Johanna and the boys passed by the town centre where a big crowd was standing in front of a stage.
Curious to know what happens there, Johanna waited for her friends.
"Look guys, there is a big crowd there. I wanna check what's going on there"
"Shall we really do it Johanna? Adelheid will be angry.", Califax said, a bit worried.
"Don't worry Califax, just a little look, hehe", Johanna replied and so her and the boy approached the place.
Looking onto the stage, there were two men and a woman. The woman was in stocks, with her feet covered in some sticky grease.
"Looks like a public punishment", Johanna said while two goats were brought onto the stage.
The spectators howled in anticipation to see the woman laugh her head off.

The kids watched the poor offender laugh out loud, until she was crying with laughter.
After watching the show for about 30 minutes, the kids decided to get the cooking ingredients and go home. On their way back to the convent Johanna suddenly said: "This woman from the public punishment was a weakling. I mean, I COULD deal with getting my feet tickled without any problems".
"Ooooh really?", Abrax said sounding pretty sarcastic.
"YES! I bet you can't make me scream for help by tickling me", Johanna said seeming pretty sure of her victory.
"Hmm", Brabax thought loudly. "How about we have a bet then. If we win we can tickle you for 30 minutes. If you win we will never tickle you again. How does that sound Johanna?" he suggested.
"Sure you're on Brabax. You got 1 hour to make me give up.", the boys nodded and Johanna smiled at them in confidence, "Good then we got a deal. This is gonna be a piece of cake".

The four friends went back to the convent and brought Sister Adelheid the ingredients.
As expected she yelled at Johanna, but as always when that happened, Johanna didn't care a bit about it.

Next morning, Johanna, Abrax, Brabax and Califax went to a nice little place in a nearby forest to play. Sitting down on an old wooden table that somebody dropped there once, Johanna thought about what her and the Abrafaxe could do.
Looking at her Brabax suddenly had an idea.
"Johanna lay down on the table. We could have our lil bet now." Johanna nodded in agreement, as did the others.
Johanna laid back and positioned herself on the table while the boys brought some rope.
"Hey what is that rope for?", Johanna asked a bit annoyed but Abrax answered quickly.
"THIS is so you can't pull away or cheat", he said.
"Hmm makes sense... Go on then", Johanna replied as her friends began to tie her to the table in a spread eagle position.
When they were finished and admired their work, Johanna was tied helplessly.
"Ok, I start", Abrax said and moved to the top of the table, placing his hands on Johanna's armpits, slowly wiggling his fingers.
"ehehehehehehehehe", Johanna giggled as she felt the soft tickles.
"Hmm that sounds quite nice but I wanna hear more. Come on Johanna laugh for me", Abrax teased and tickled faster causing Johanna to giggle more aswell but it didn't go to his expectation.
He tickled faster and faster for 20 minutes he used his fingers, nails and feathers which he found on the ground, but Johanna just laughed softly at best.

Disappointed by his fail, Abrax sat back and watched as Brabax sat on the table onto Johanna's legs.
"So Brabax? You wanna lose aswell hehe", she taunted her red-haired friend.
"Oh we will see, I'm unbeatable at tickling."
"Sure sure", was all Johanna had to say before Brabax began to tickle her belly with his hands.
"ehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe", Johanna giggled alot right from the start, indicating that her belly is more ticklish than her armpits.
Trying his best to make her give up, Brabax tickled Johanna's belly and sides furiously.
"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA", Johanna laughed loud as she felt her friend's fingers wiggling back and forth, from spot to spot, all over her belly and sides. Brabax used all his knowledge in tickling, which was very good, to cause her to submit.
"EHEHEHEHEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHI!", Johanned laughed louder and harder as time went by.
Though her torso was quite ticklish and Brabax using his great tickling techniques, Johanna resisted the merciless tickling for another 20 minutes.
Panting alot after it was over she said: "You did your best Brabax... but it sure wasn't enough to make me lose the bet..."

"Now it's my turn", Califax said and picked up another feather, then positioning himself in front of Johanna's feet.
Her soles were dirty from walking around barefoot. Califax slightly touched Johanna's right sole with the fingers of his left hand.
"Eeeek!", Johanna shrieked in surprise as she felt Califax' fingers.
Califax moved his fingers up and down a bit to get a feeling for her soles, while Johanna closed her eyes and bit her lip a bit, trying not to giggle.
Sitting at the side being annoyed from their unsuccessful tries, Abrax and Brabax were watching Califax.
"Wow Johanna, it's amazing how soft your soles are, knowing that you walk around barefoot all the time. Maybe that's the only positive thing about Adelheid being so strict", Califax spoke, smiling as he slowly moved his fingers and the feather up and down Johanna's soles.
Johanna was very surprised to feel the strongest tingling in her whole life.
Due to this, she bit her lip some more and pressed her eyes shut.
Califax tickled her soles with his fingers and the feather for nearly 20 minutes.
Laughing very hard, harder and harder, crying with loud laughter, Johanna wasn't able to take much more.
Finally, less then a minute before the time ran out, Johanna gave up.
"No no.. it can't be true... i can't have lost", she said not believing she had lost the bet.
"Oh yes, you have", Califax answered with a bright and evil grin as the other two boys joined him.
"You know what that means Johanna. 30 minutes of tickling, 1 on 3 hehe", they laughed.

"Um.. I guess I do", Johanna answered shaking a bit, still from the previous foot tickling, knowing that what's awaiting her will be much worse than that.
After letting her catch her breathe for a moment the boys thought about what to do first.
"Hmm..", Abrax said, "let's play the goat-game on her feet".
"OH YES!", Brabax and Califax shouted, "but we need to clean her feet first. Califax bring out the brushes", Brabax said and ordered, while Califax brought 3 brushes.
"Boys, you're not gonna do what I think you're going to do, right?", Johanna asked nervously.
"Hmm if you think we're gonna brush your feet clean, then you are right", Abrax replied with a bright smile on his face while Johanna's eyes widened in horror.
Not only couldn't she stand this kind of foot tickling but also the boys had no soapy water, which caused the cleaning process to take longer.

"Ok, everyone seems ready, we can start!", Brabax said as him and Abrax began brushing Johanna's soles from balls to heels, while Califax took care of her toes.
Johanna squirmed back and forth, throwing her head back and laughed already.
"NOHOHOHOHOH BOYS DOHOHOHOHON'T", Johanna pleaded.
"Awww come one Johanna we have barely started", Abrax said and smiled with a mix of fun and pure sadism.
The boys brushed Johanna's soles going faster and faster knowing that they only had 30 minutes of fun before having to untie her.
"NYHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA COME OHOHOHOHOHON HAVE MERCY HAHAHAHAHAHAHA IT TIHIHIHIHIHCKLES SO SO MUCH!!", Johanna screamed with loud laughter as the tickling got worse and worse for her with every increase of speed.
And feeling 3 instead of just 1 scrubbing brush wasn't helpful to her either.
All Johanna could do was laugh from the top of her lungs while the ticklish sensations went through her body.

After 10 minutes of pure hell for Johanna and great fun for the Abrafaxe her feet were all clean.
"Ok, soles are all cleaned up, now on to part 2!", Abrax shouted, signalizing Califax to pull out a small jar. Johanna meanwhile was panting heavily and was happy to be able to regain her breathe a bit.
Her eyes were full of tears, but by now they haven't come out.
"They may have beaten me but I won't give them the satisfaction to make me cry with laughter again.", Johanna thought and prepared for round 2.
Califax opened the jar he carried and put the sticky golden liquid, widely known as honey, that was inside the jar onto her soles and toes.
"What are you doing there guys?", Johanna asked confused and a bit curious.
"We will show you now Johanna", Brabax answered smirking as the Abrafaxe went close to her feet and began licking the honey off of them.
"Nyahahahahahaha oh hahahaha it tihihihihihihihihickles", Johanna giggled wildly at the new sensation she felt.
She never had her feet licked.
It felt weird to her, but somehow relaxing, besides the tickling of course..

Clearly enjoying themselves Abrax, Brabax and Califax licked on and left no inch of her cute feet out.
"Ahahahahahahahahahah thihihihihihihis is weihihihihihird buhuhuhuhuhut fun hehehehehehehe", Johanna giggled more and more.
As if the boys had talked about it before they all began to lick Johanna's feet and toes softer.
It still tickled, but also was meant to feel good since Johanna just admitted to enjoy it in a strange kind of way. It was like a foot massage just with tongues instead of hands.
"Ohhhhhhh mmmmmmm hehehehehehehehe mmmmmmm this iihihihihihihis nice", Johanna giggled and moaned softly in enjoyment.
The boys licked on in the same slightly ticklish and enjoyable way they did before letting everyone enjoy the moment.
"Mmmmmmmm that's so nice heheheheheh nyahahahahahahaha mmmmmmmm", Johanna half giggled, half moaned at the feeling she was experiencing.
This went on until all honey was licked off.
"Time's up guys, Brabax said as he untied Johanna who was panting a bit, but also very relaxed.
"Well... Johanna", Brabax said and then admitted, "we cheated a bit. Actually you have won the bet, but we couldn't really resist the urge to lick your cute feet."
Johanna smiled sweetly and looked at the boys for a moment then said: "That's ok. And I know a fitting punishment for this"
"Oh really? What is it?", Califax asked curiously.
"Tomorrow we do this again but then you will lick on and on till the jar is empty, got it?"
Blushing and with sparkling eyes the boys nodded fast.
As desired by Johanna the boys did exactly what they were told to.

Johanna loved it very much and slowly developed a thing for having her feet worshipped. With 3 boys wanting to do that, she also had found 3 willing foot slaves, but that's a different story...
This is the final version for this story a request from my friend :iconphuram:
The Work-In-Progress version was uploaded a few weeks ago.

I had this one finished for some time now, but thought the whole time that I've already uploaded it which wasn't the case obviously.

So :iconphuram: I'm really really sorry for letting you wait so long. My deepest apologies.

I hope everyone likes the full version.
Comments and critics are dearly appreciated
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stormyalice's avatar
This is awesome. I love it when people make bets tha benefits them.